instantly I i hit a snag.
Jonathan (my Quaker) speaks in thees and thous. I’ve just realised that I havent got either his mother or his maternal grandfather speaking like that. I could change them – will have to i suppose – but its a bit of a mountain for the reader – it wasnt too bad when he was only talking to David – who doesnt thee and thou…
AND – how did they light candles? tinder boxes i’m assuming? Jon “fumbles in the dark for a candle” couldhe do it in the dark.
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