Transgressing – Look!

instantly I i hit a snag.

Jonathan (my Quaker) speaks in thees and thous.  I’ve just realised that I havent got either his mother or his maternal grandfather speaking like that.  I could change them – will have to i suppose – but its a bit of a mountain for the reader – it wasnt too bad when he was only talking to David – who doesnt thee and thou…


AND – how did they light candles?  tinder boxes i’m assuming?  Jon “fumbles in the dark for a candle”  couldhe do it in the dark.


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