Editting with Eratses

The bank stretched a distance along the bank

hmm – perhaps that’s because it was a bank?

sat at a table that could seat 20 at least, looking as pale as china.

a china table! delicate!


And I have an expanding character – he starts out as

Myles Graham was a little more slight than Jude Middleton,

and then later!

Myles was, as his clothes had hinted, of a broader build than Jude

it must be the good Norfolk air that does it.

Shoot me. please.

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2 Responses to Editting with Eratses

  1. Donald says:

    [thoughfully eyes the Editing Whip]

  2. Erastes says:

    There ain’t no sich whip!!

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