Six Sentence Sunday

From “Mere Mortals” out very soon!

“I’ll say goodnight here,” he said, at the door. “I’ll leave the ubiquitous Albert to tuck you in. I want to find a book.”

“Goodnight, Jude,” I said. “I look forward to hearing you torture Philip’s piano, although how hands like yours could be anything but artistic, I can’t imagine.”

“How kind of you, dear Crispin,” he said, brushing a finger down my cheek, his airy flirtatious tone having returned at last.

“Goodnight, Jude,” I said again, but I was stayed by his hand catching mine, stopping me from opening the door.


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19 Responses to Six Sentence Sunday

  1. Graylin Fox says:

    A sexy goodnight!

  2. Congrats on this new release! Looks intriguing.

  3. I love the snow!! Great snippet.

  4. Erastes says:

    Thank you!

  5. Erastes says:

    Thank you! I hope people like it!

  6. Erastes says:

    :D –thank you!

  7. sue says:

    intersting names …

  8. Erastes says:

    not too weird i hope!

  9. Lindsay says:

    Love the building to tension between the two.

  10. Erastes says:


  11. J.C. Martin says:

    Cool flirty dialogue. Nice 6.

  12. Erastes says:

    that’s kind – thank you

  13. Lisa Fox says:

    That snow is awesome and that is a great goodnight.

  14. Lovely, lovely dialogue!

  15. Lauri J Owen says:

    Great six! I love the dialogue!

  16. Erastes says:

    thank you, Susanna! I’ll have to check on everyone else tomorrow!

  17. Erastes says:

    Thank you, Lisa!

  18. Erastes says:

    Thank you, Lauri!

  19. Pippa Jay says:

    Crispin clearly wants more than words for his goodnight wish. :)

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